one climbs up
the other supports
one falls on the way
the other catches
each remembers their path
both ease the burdens
both offer relief
as challenges continue
as life serves each day
together both find answers and understanding
Free verse by PamelaWLucas 6/20/18
Inspirational photo by Pinterest
5 thoughts on “The flow of two: up and down”
I so love the purety and power of this work!!
A golden thanks to you, Bill. I really appreciate your style as well. Brevity has always appealed to me…less words strong meaning. I find this challenging.
And in brevity…true artistry and genius are exposed. And we see that in your work!
You are so kind.
Just calling it as I see it! 🙂